Main Task - 4th Draft

Here is my 4th draft for my opening of my thriller, the changes I made from my 3rd draft:

1. Added more titles such as “Costume and makeup by...”, “Cinematography by…” etc
2. Moved the title closer to the front of the opening
3. Changed the fonts on all the titles so they were all the same and were clear to read 

Some of the feedback I recieved from this was:

"Your "executive producers" title says "executive produces" (this wS  typo). It was suggested that I might look at  the soundscape at the end cos that it continues and fades out rather than cutting off relatively abruptly?"